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Daddy

Drink after drink
hit after hit
i cry
he laughs
why do you stink
like boze and rum
he hits me again
i try to run
he tells me in worthless
stupid
dumb
i tell him
please daddy please
stop
your hurting our family
but he doesnt listen
just goes into the kitchen
and he just yells some more
as i fall to the floor
and i say
love you too daddy

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  • dustytiger
    November 15, 2008
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    this is so sad, i am so sorry that you need to deal with that, what a powerful write