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Lullaby

As I lay you down to sleep,
Let your dreams be warm and deep,
Know you're safe and in my care,
When morning comes I'll still be there,
Come now my baby, rest your eyes,
The day is done, I know time flies,
Your blanket and pillow are waiting for you,
Your mummy's nearby and her love is true.

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Option 5 - Lullaby.. sorry i forgot to put this here! Was too busy singing this to my little one!

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  • dustytiger
    November 15, 2008

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    this is such a sweet lullaby, i can actually picture it being sung to a small child, what a fantastic poem, best of luck in the contest


  • Alyzeh
    November 15, 2008

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    Awww..this is so chocolate sweet with a cherry on top! Hehe. Really nice flow and vivid imagery. Thank you for entering the contest and good luck to you!


  • Ryan79
    November 15, 2008
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    Great poem

    Sweet. I love it so much. Great lullaby. It's beautiful. Good luck in the contest.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    awww, this flows excellently, and is just so sweet and serne, thanks so much for entering, and good luck

    but i need you to put the prompt in your AN's...its one of the rules. please and thank you.

    take care
    Stephanie ♥