In the dark
Hand twitches on my knee
Slides
And a screaming feeling beats through my heart
I'd call it Red
Stop.
You stop, but, please, don't stop.
Red fades to grey
Heartbeat diminishes.
I don't want this movie
Or the popcorn or this armrest
between -barrier - us
Lets keep the dark though.
And the red,
Red chairs and those deep, light petals falling from the ceiling and
That Red feeling
Where the only words that come to mind are cusses
And I'm not sure who I am
Though you are crystal clear
Fingertips on fingertips
And I want you now, in the back alley
Or the toilets, or a bed
I have gone somewhere between metal and liquid
Petals perhaps
or splinters of love
Breaking off and trying to cling on
And trying to pull me apart
Its like I'm tiny
And this one brush
Paints a Red earthquake
Shaking me to pieces
Author notes
this is true actually :L
I went to see Quantam of Solace with my bf.
A contest entry
- Pop my Quickie Cherry by Disturbed Prodigy.
700 points, ended November 17, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
...its not adult enough is it?
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i think it is perfect the way it is and am honored to have it in the contest, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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you prompt is
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