Winter's ferocity belittles,
relinquishing his snowy grasp.
Allowing flowers to awaken,
from their dispiriting hibernation.
Each blossoming petal by petal,
aiding it's enthralling beauty.
Until chattering hands come down,
plucking it from their rich course bed,
to ask the endless school girl chant,
“He loves me, he loves me not”
Author notes
Prompt:
1-picture above ^^^^ credit: he_loves_me_by yabbles
A contest entry
- WRITE! by luna-midnight.
700 points, ended December 16, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - picture prompt by Draig aine.
1300 points, ended February 11, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Let me know how I did....
Comments
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lovely
well done -
A lovely poem woven here...Good imagery..
All the best in the contest!
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i love the way you personified the daisy in this, i have never really thought of writing anything like that, what a great idea! best of luck in the contest
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Aww..this is such a sweet write,makes me dreamy and paints a lovely picture! Thanks a lot for entering, and like my lovely Stephanie said, author notes, dont forget.
Good luck to you!
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nicely written i really like it, but you need to place the prompt in your AN's.....okay?
but wonderful job and thanks so much for entering
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Sorry I was going to write after I finished writing it but my internet is being a piece of crap.....thank you for the wonderful comment
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dont worry ^_^ i understand, and thanks again
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