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Fuck me like fire
or are you scared
though we know you are horny
does it frighten you to be pared

Lingering wanting lips
ask me to enter
how that fire burns
it is your centre

Curl your toes angel
as you feel me swell
so deep inside you
in your lovers well

Scream my name
curl your loving lips
spread your wings angel
as I slide between your hips
























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3-"He makes Winter feel like Spring, with love blooming from the cold" Stephanie Wood

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  • Anyajoellienne
    December 19, 2008
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    even stronger passion
    a fire growing
    very good


  • Ken-Maverick
    December 2, 2008

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    Judged!

    This was a hot and steamy write indeed,
    well done with the flow and rhyme

    All the best to you in the contest

    Ken


  • hotchocolate gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    WOW!!! This was a great one from you and I enjoyed it! Good luck in the contest


  • XneverXgoodXenoughX
    November 15, 2008
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    Amazing. im speechless


  • Alyzeh
    November 15, 2008

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    Oh boy! That was sizzling hot. Honestly, a very unique take on the prompt and a great read! Thank you for entering and good luck to you!


  • luna-midnight gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    wow....i didnt knwo anyone could take it the way you did with my prompt. its mind blowing

    awesome poem, and good luck. thanks for entering
    Stephanie ♥

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