There's life untainted beyond frozen streams
So gently must the only way be crossed
Among the Winter's glaciated leaves
A hidden beauty deeper than first frost
A crystal formed, too fragile to desire
Enforced by its own shadow to retire
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well this is gosh darn pretty, very nice
thanks for entering this here
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"a hidden beauty deeper than first frost...a crystal formed, too fragile to desire; enforced by its own shadow to retire" great work!
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love the ending couplet
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i agree, you were able to make this piece serious and flow well without using meaningless 'filler words' that makes the poem crappy. something i do lol. wonderful write, i have to read more from you, i love talented poets, you inspire me and help me to grow. much love and respect.
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It's nice to see rhyme in these contests because most people can't pull it off (me included) in such a short word count.
It's almost a semi-sonnet. This contest is certainly getting some formidable entries.
Good luck
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