Blindfolded--
I do not see your faults,
or find them uneasy
It's only with loves eyes,
do I truly see...
what is,
your inner beauty
Author notes
please refrain from using (these, this, and, but, the)..
A contest entry
- Short Poems ( 25 words or less) by OurGoldenYears Page.
660 points, ended November 19, 2008, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is beautiful...you do write of love with such beauty and grace...
well done on the trophy...
mystic
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congrats, Mally
you write love so beautifully.
Laney xxoo
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wow finally some stars i can click on...like the stars in you eyes
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thank you
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thank you
you penned this beautifully, and well illustrated with your words, as love does exist in the inner soul, thank you for this entry, good luck
Linda
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thank you linda... i know this is a simple writng, yet sometimes it's all, that need be said...
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