still can't I believe
everything turned so wrong
this is not what i intended
[i_am_so_sorry]
all i feel
so
G/U/I/L/T/Y
so
L/O/N/E/L/Y
so
F/A/R A/W/A/Y
so
F/O/R/G/O/T/T/E/N
i gave my all
just_to_be_with_you
just_to_see_ur_smile
'please'
_i need you_
C.O.Z
_i love you_
*...i can wait forever for you...*
Author notes
by mizerdrea
- A Dirty Pretty Group group list • next in list
A contest entry
- Dirty Pretty PW Allowed by theshadowedone.
700 points, ended November 16, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Time to upgrade those green shinies again! by Nicada.
1000 points, ended December 11, 2008, 13 entries
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550 points, ended January 23, 28 entries
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Very sweet, great write.
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*...i can wait forever for you...*
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aww this is very sweet
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Lovely write. It's so deep and emotional. Bravo!<3
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A strong expression
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This is very sad, and the form must be the "dirty pretty" I hear about, and never know what that is. I guess I'm just old.
Great job sharing some very painful feelings. Thanks so much for entering. Blessings, Patty
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That last line is just beautiful... Excellent write Roxy...
~lub lae
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thank you axel...
XD
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"I can wait forever..." one moment while I burst into tears...
okay, now that that's out of my system. great write. thank you.
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aww,,,thank you..
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