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You Are My Dream

Y ou are my dream; my everything
O nly your love can make things real;
U nconditional love: I pledge to you

A lmost near, but not so close to me
R eaching for the impossible dream
E nvisaging your every clandestine

M y heart aches so much for you
Y ou are my tears and laughter.

D elusion, vague and unforeseen
R eality still awaits fulfillment
E xpecting, believing confidently
A ll the waiting will soon be over;
M y hope that our dreams will come true



summer51

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"...you are my dream,,,and I want to hold you so much,,,
to feel the real, live you in my arms some day." - Oldboy -


"You are my dream, too. And I will just express it in poetry... for now."
- summer -

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  • second-born
    December 29, 2008
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    dreamy yet very real...I love its sincerity and purity...you must be so in love kabayan!!!


    • Summer52
      December 30, 2008
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      Hello, second-born

      YES, indeed. .. very real... yet, still in a dreamland...

      Thanks, "kabayan."


      HAPPY NEW YEAR, too! s


      summer51


  • sense surreal
    November 18, 2008

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    Envisaging your every clandestine

    I love this part Mommy
    Very nicely done acrostic
    and I learned a new word: envisaging

    sigh...someday
    I feel this...
    Love is patient and Patience is a virtue I must cultivate

    I am talking this mantra to myself

    • Summer52
      November 19, 2008
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      Patience is a virtue...

      YES, Ann. very true.
      In every thing we do... we need patience, so we can achieve what we want.

      Thank you, again.


      summer51


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    November 16, 2008
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    Always the dreamer,
    the motivator that
    the dream will someday
    come vividly true!!

    • Summer52
      November 16, 2008
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      Dear Mumsy,,,

      I am a dreamer, maybe because it's part of my personality.
      I dream to mold it to reality.

      Thanks, again.

      summer51

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