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Im Not Okay

See These Tears On My Face Now
I Have No Way To Get Out
Of This Prison And Time Has Run Out For Me
I Dont Know What To Believe
Im Lost In A World Of Confusion
And Noone Knows What Im Doin
When I Hold The Trigger Tighter
Cutting My Skin Deeper And Raise The Rope Higher
You See This Smile And Convince Yourself Its Real
After All You Know Just How I Feel
Hear The Laugh I Force Out Of My Throat
Ignore The Shakiness and The Cracking Notes
You Claim I'll Be Alirght Go Take A Nap
Everything Will Be Better After That
And We Won't Have To Deal With This
We Can Always Just Forget All Of It
You Look At Me Waiting For Me To Speak
And I Say All Kinds Of Things
But The One Thing I Can Never Say
"Im Not Okay"

What do you think yall?

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  • SaviDropKick.Oi.
    November 15, 2008
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    Baby who is this for?
    Gimme your number...ill call you. or you can call me. I got my cell


  • xXundeadXx
    November 15, 2008
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    Its good

    I like the way yoou used caps on the beginning of every word


  • MisguidedGhost
    November 15, 2008
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    This is really good chelsea.