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Scared

In My Heart I Never Felt So Lost
Never Before Wasted Time With Theses Thoughts
Instead I Ran Away And Hid Behind My Shields
Using My Defenses To Stop The Pain From Feeling Real
I Wish I Could Stop This Fear
Form Leaking Through And Causing Me To Spill My Tears
But I Feel Like I Am Running In Circles Going NoWhere Fast
How The Hell Can I Make This The Past
Feel Like Im Drowning And There Is No Way Out
I Kick And Fight And Scream And Shout
NoOne Can Hear Me Whimper In The Dark
Here I Am Someone Save Me From A BrokenHeart
A Gripping Fear When You Said GoodBye
What Can I Do To Make You Return To My Side

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  • ChaingangAngel
    November 15, 2008

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    good

    This was short and too the point I loved how you expressed your feeling so freely! keep up the good work, and thanks for entering and good luck