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Haiku




going through her things
strands of my grandmother's hair
before it was gray.






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Swan Song

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  • withering.whisper
    September 21

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    aw, this is very powerful and it tugs at the heart because of how family means to us. congrats on ANOTHER trophy.lol. and take care!


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    June 20

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    How

    on earth can you ever keep track of your writing if all your Haiku is titled Haiku? Worthy of that silver! You certainly have a different approach with Ku than I! I never use punctuation ~ but yours has a definite sophistication that mine lack!


  • individuality gold member
    June 9

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    a good piece, ah a nice poem here, makes me think of smiles inside time's hallways, perhaps a little sad for the person might have passed away into new realms but still a soft sentimental poem.


  • Draig aine gold member
    December 20, 2008
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    so subtle

    takes you on a flight of breath and words


  • Mariana gold member
    November 17, 2008
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    Lovely
    Mariana


  • Harrisham Minhas
    November 17, 2008

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    Thank you for your Haiku:

    going through her things
    strands of my grandmother's hair
    before it was gray.

    This is a tender write which expresses your feeling of nostalgia.
    A wonderful Senryu.

    Thanks again.

    Harrisham Minhas




  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 15, 2008

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    i kind of don't know what this means but i like the image it paints, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest

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