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well fed gobbler
last  meal presented before
he becomes dinner.





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  • withering.whisper
    September 21
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    haha. well tis is ironic and funny, as long as i'm not the one making your meal.lol
    congrats on another trophy, and take care!

  • Poor

    turkey! I would've titled this Gobbler! Interesting take & Ku. Worthy of that HM!

  • a good poem penned, eek, it sounds like death row to me, here, have a nice fat meal before we cook you.


  • Draig aine gold member
    December 20, 2008

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    well done

    well not over done, love bird humor, 14 in the freezer, less one coming out on Tuesday just loved the write

  • Judith Chandler
    November 16, 2008

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    That's the food chain for you! Something to think about as you tuck into white or dark meat. Or drumsticks.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 15, 2008

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    you know you have just made me hunger with that small poem, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Venugopal gold member
    November 15, 2008
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    so pathetic, well done


  • Three Doves
    November 15, 2008

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    Ah Yes! Happy Thanksgiving! Excellent Choice of Words. Best wishes in life and the contest
    Peace in light and love
    Noah

  • carole21
    November 15, 2008
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    cute take on the prompt . thanks for the contest entry

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