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autumn scene

vibrant colors blend
naked leaves show change
fall commands

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prompt: haiku
non-tradtional haiku


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  • azure85 gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    vibrant colors blend
    naked leaves show change
    fall commands

    A lovely blend of colors and words, that makes this a wonderful haiku for the season. Thank you so much!


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    November 15, 2008
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    Good haiku


  • dustytiger
    November 15, 2008

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    i'm not generally a fan of haiku, but this i like a lot, so simple but you can see what you are desribing, best of luck in the contest

    • carole21
      November 22, 2008
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      thanks for the comments on autumn scene . .