I stand, i look down at the black box beneath my feet,
the harmony sings there song,
from then on,
i was broken in two, my world was shattered,
my heart ached, nothing else mattered,
no one understood how it felt, who shows empathy to me?
no one could ever see...
i recall the day, that dreadful, hideous day,
the time where my life went away,
she cannot be replaced, she cannot be found,
she will no longer make another sound.
i hear the cries, the tears, the sorrow ,
but no one here can feel what i feel,
i will never heal,
they wont understand that she meant more to me,
then any other human being,
this tune that buzzes in my ear,
the tune that not anyone else can hear,
her singing, her caring voice,
this song had rejoiced,
my heart,
right from the start,
this empathic requiem.
A contest entry
- The Feelings you get by ChaingangAngel.
400 points, ended November 29, 2008, 24 entries
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Comments
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you have expressed your grif so well in this poem it's really good, but your not alone, i think most of us can relate, i lost my farther 20 years ago and sometime if feels like yesterday, i just tell myself that he wouldn't want me to feel like this then i try to reflect on the good times we had.
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Well done. I liked the line, "the tune that not anyone else can hear". Very personnal. When you find that one to love, you belive your heart will never heal. This piece speaks to this. Thanks!
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WOW
First off I want to say that this is a good write and thanks for entering my contest and second you will get over this feeling I promise you that I have felt this way and I have moved on!!!!!! Good luck and I hope you can move on!!
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