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remain
desert's sand seed
as granule

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  • azure85 gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    remain
    desert's sand seed
    as granule

    Very nice haiku, as the desert remains eternally within each piece of sand. The endurance is felt throughout your haiku, thank you so much.


  • maralisa silver member
    November 16, 2008
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    a brilliant haiku dad good luck inthe contest maralisa


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    November 15, 2008
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    Good haiku