autumn chills
crimson leaves slumber
winter tiptoes
grey clouds hasten
solemn days begin
icy solitude
faith continues
fires burn brightly
hopes remain vigilant
Author notes
prompt:
weather, hope, faith
non-traditional haiku chain
23 words
A contest entry
- Short Poems ( 25 words or less) by misticmoonlite.
660 points, ended November 19, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nicely done, Carole... My only critique would be the last haiku didn't seem to connect with the first two... you lost the nature feel. Still, it was beautiful read and I wish you all the best...
Ken
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thanks
actually the third haiku is because of the first two . . so the connection . . appreciate the read . . notice it is non-traditional so not limited to nature . .
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lovely chain...you penned with all that was requested lovely entry to my contest...good luck
Linda
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