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penning feelings
ink dried up
words pause

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  • azure85 gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    penning feelings
    ink dried up
    words pause

    Very nice haiku, the Zen moment exists within yourself even when you think it does not. Thank you so much.


  • maralisa silver member
    November 16, 2008
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    wow an outstanding haiku so powerful dad good luck inthe contest maralisa


  • Mr Id
    November 15, 2008

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    Cool idea- I like that this poem is about not being able to write a poem.

    This kind of contemplation is typically Japanese, as are are hokkus, so nice work!


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    November 15, 2008
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    In between thoughts. great haiku