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novembers chilly winds
summers gone
and flowers mourn

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  • azure85 gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    novembers chilly winds
    summers gone
    and flowers mourn

    Nice comparison in your haiku, with the chill and the farewell to flowers and warmth. Thank you so much.


  • Mr Id
    November 15, 2008
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    Cool personification of flowers.

    Luck in contest!


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    November 15, 2008
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    I wish it was summer LOL good haiku