labored moon
inspects below
approving all her autumn
gold
Author notes
The golden tones are so rich in these excellent photos. Great moon shots!
In a list
A contest entry
- Fully by Mari Goes.
1300 points, ended November 22, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I picture the moon looking down at the beauty of Autumn Very neautiful.
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Nice!
Perfect write to match those fine photos! You always sound so very Zen in your short writes! I love this...
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Wow! Such stunning imagery in so few words! I so admire people who can do that. You certainly have an ah ha moment at the end. Made me catch my breath!
Thanks for sharing
Gaylene
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The idea of the moon looking at her effect on the leaves is simply lovely!
I didn't think of that before, and now I see something else when looking at those pictures. Thank you for that
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Lovely personification, made me smile.
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in so few words you manage to create such a beautiful atmosphere - this is a wonderful take on the prompts - I really like how you have given the moon such a great personality 
I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Keep writing
Polly
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I would not think of the moon being labored, that is an inventive way of approaching the contest! But I would think if the moon did inspect that she would be pleased with her handiwork! I enjoyed your haiku.
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Interesting way of interpreting the pictures provided in this contest. Much stimulation for the senses in the photos - nature takes us to wonderful places, so do your words.
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