Freezing temperatures
run fast down November's back
white waits patiently
Rain drops start to turn
shivering at starting line
call it a snow day.
A contest entry
- 48 hours to Haiku by azure85.
900 points, ended November 21, 2008, 36 entries
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Makes me want to see some flakes falling.
Joe
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Freezing temperatures
run fast down November's back
white waits patiently
Rain drops start to turn
shivering at starting line
call it a snow day.
Oh, those magical words in your L3, snow day. You have describe the chill of the season so well, and that happy AHA moment makes the child in us smile. Thank you so much!
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Snow is right around the corner wish it was spring. Great write.
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BRRRRRR! A perrrrrrrfect discription.
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By the way, the first of these two is my fave.
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Lovely and abstract. Thanks for sharing.
Good luck in contest- this is my fave so far!
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