rake leaves tomorrow~
next day, don't see any leaves
it snowed overnight
Author notes
A procrastinators tale...LOL
A contest entry
- 48 hours to Haiku by azure85.
900 points, ended November 21, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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It brought to mind the old saying" I'll see to that someday" brill
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I really love this piece
... the whole thing is beautiful - but it has a nice undertone of self-incrimination that gives it a lovely touch of humour - well done!
Keep writing
Polly
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rake leaves tomorrow~
next day, don't see any leaves
it snowed overnight
Oh, that is what I am almost hoping for! A great haiku for this time of year, and a wonderful AHA moment indeed. Thank you so much!
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Did they blow to your neighbors yard? Great.
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Quite a cool haiku of transition- quite traditional, I would say, what with the references to nature and seasons and such.
Nice work- good luck in contest!
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