Time flies when your falling,
And I've fallen pretty deep.
I feel I've known you for a minute
When it's really been weeks.
The moment I saw you,
Time passed me by.
When I got to know you,
I only knew a lie.
Time flies when your falling,
I'm as deep as I could get,
The minute that I mentioned,
A month flew over head.
I don't know what you where thinking,
The moment we crossed paths,
Did you think that being some-one else,
That we would ever last.
Time flies when your falling.
Your officially out of my mind,
I've smashed up all the clocks.
Because I've left you far behind.
A contest entry
- Wasted time? by Talitha777.
1000 points, ended December 21, 2008, 26 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Hope you liked xox
Comments
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lol. this is cute.
it is a great way of putting how fast good love can go bad!
i really enjoyed this, it is a wonderful read!
your Faerie
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very good :)
i loved the poem
your a very talented writer, thankyou for the comment on my poem aswell
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