The gentle breeze, over my balcony,
see the full moon, staring at me,
feel like i've been transported into a dream,
away from my problems,
into a deep thought of feelings,
all with moral meanings,
the trees block my view just suddenly,
as the wind blows the branches,
the inspirational feeling to enhance,
what i can do, what i can accomplish,
the blackened sky and cloudy atmosphere,
makes me realise why it is i'm here,
to make me head for my goals in life,
inspire me to do things i know i might fail,
but i'll try and inhale,
maybe i can succeed on what i'm capable of,
these pictures i see give me hope,
from everything i can't cope.
A contest entry
- Fully by Mari Goes.
1300 points, ended November 22, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Lovely sentiments you show here. I enjoyed seeing how hope and light came through along the lines.
You saw joy and comfort on those pictures, thank you!
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Great write enjoy the imagery.
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They ae awe inspiring pictures aren't they! I think this is exceptional, just perfect for the contest. Keep up the good work!
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