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Hard Love

Finding it hard
the feelings.

Can't let go
so new.

A craving she has
for this man.

Can't let go
the heart
not easy.

Need to ask
worried of
the answer
but need
to go.

Move along...

Author notes

Have only felt it twice in my life.
Struggling to feel it a third time. Not sure if I can get there from here. I am stalled in reverse gear.

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  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 15, 2008
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    wow..

    I would offer advice, but i'm terrible at that one!!
    good stuff my friend..