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A Smell, A Touch

I breath you in and know we're perfect together, your lips touch mine and I know we'll be together forever.

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  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    November 15, 2008
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    Very nicely done I love the sincerity within this.


  • iamthebeatles
    November 15, 2008
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    oh how sweet and romantic. you capture so many emotions in so little words.
    great job, good luck babe

    cassie


  • iamthebeatles
    November 15, 2008

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    oh how sweet and romantic. you capture so many emotions in so little words.
    great job, good luck babe

    cassie


  • SouthernDownpour
    November 15, 2008
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    awe, Kyle that was beautiful!!! Good luck in the contest u should totally win =D