Found on her pillow when she opened her eyes
A beautiful note that made her sob
Cuddled next to a long stem rose
A delightful fragrance, blood red covered in dew
And this is what it said
Thank you baby for the rest of my life
For the honor and pleasure of being my wife
I love you more than mere words can explain
The preacher is waiting later today
Will You Marry Me
A contest entry
- Passing A Note To All Poets by Dalaney.
750 points, ended November 23, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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What a joy to read! This has such
a feel-good quality to it - made me smile.
Thank you so much for entering my contest.
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I thank you for taking the time to leave a comment and such a nice one too. LOL God Bless, Jo-Ann
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J....wow, what a romantic poem! Full of such imagery and sentiments that sweep one off their feet reading! This is winner penning....A delight to read..All the best in the contest! Bookmarking!
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Thank you so much for the generousity of your words. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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I really liked this. I thought it was very sweet and loveable, and made me want to go "awwww". The only thing that annoyed me a bit was the ending line. I felt like the "your anxiously waiting groom" should be seperated from "will you marry me", because as it is now it just goes into one, which I'm sure isn't what you intended.
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Wow! What a way to wake up that would be!
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An awesome romantic poem, it sure would be a great way to propose. Great job!
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I think I'll leave this poem laying around maybe it will give ideas to someone special. LOL God Bless, Jo-Ann
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