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Us

there is not a moment in my day that you are not with me
that my heart dose not stop and sigh
my head spinning with the memories of our lives together
and the soft spoken words of love play over and over in my mind


you are the very essences that fills my soul and captures my heart
the one person on earth that fits me in every way
i have stood by your side through every event of our marriage
and never waved once in your eyes as you have not in mine


our bond is beyond words to express
and my love unconditional

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  • Dalaney gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    Whomever receives a note like this is surely blessed. Thank you so much for entering my contest. Love, Lane


  • Beating gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    In the line:
    "our bound is beyond words to express"
    Shouldn't it be "bond" instead of "bound"?

    Other than that, I felt that this piece was sweet, full of love and the kind of thing that makes everyone else hope! Good job!


  • PerVirtuous
    November 15, 2008

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    Here, here! Very personal and philosophical, too. I FEEL the love in this! The background makes it difficult to read... but I give you three enthusiastic bunnies anyway!