She is Maralisa
a great painting came to life;
her thoughts touch me
through her pictures,
they stir my feelings
deeply,
I didn't see her
an invisible current,
but she is behind my words
calm flowing feelings in ease
Author notes
dedicated to
'Maralisa'
A contest entry
- Passing A Note To All Poets by Dalaney.
750 points, ended November 23, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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such lovely words. thank you for entering my contest. love, lane
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I find it quite special to read poetry about other people here at AP - we all come to mean so much to each other, and we share intimacy through our words, yet we (most of us) have never met in reality. It's quite funny.
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I am loving all those peoms people are writing about each other. This one was just as lovely as any other poem I have read today. Simply beautiful.
Much love
~Noor

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thank you so much
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aw thank you dad it is an honor to have a beautiful dedication good luck in the contest

maralisa


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