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My A.P. daughter

She is Maralisa
a great painting came to life;
her thoughts touch me
through her pictures,
they stir my feelings
deeply,
I didn't see her
an invisible current,
but she is behind my words
calm flowing feelings in ease

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dedicated to
'Maralisa'

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  • Dalaney gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    such lovely words. thank you for entering my contest. love, lane


  • Beating gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    I find it quite special to read poetry about other people here at AP - we all come to mean so much to each other, and we share intimacy through our words, yet we (most of us) have never met in reality. It's quite funny.


  • Hikari Lady
    November 15, 2008

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    I am loving all those peoms people are writing about each other. This one was just as lovely as any other poem I have read today. Simply beautiful.

    Much love
    ~Noor


  • maralisa silver member
    November 15, 2008

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    aw thank you dad it is an honor to have a beautiful dedication good luck in the contest maralisa

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