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Orphan

Scared child  -lost
parents broke -jobless
starving -now homeless
bailout for -the rich
no money- where are they
parents gone -orphaned
lost, starving, broke, alone
presidential election -oval whitehouse
tea and cakes, talk and chai
lost, alone, starving orphaned
child

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 17, 2008

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    I like that you brought in an election and tea to show that not everyone gets the choice of tea and cakes; beautifulyl sad this is powerfully penned

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    Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda