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No Replacement

I think about you all the time,
I can not get you off my mind.
Every where i see your face,
Your a part of me I cant replace.
Thinking about you drives me mad,
Your the one thing that i wish i had.
Without you my life so dull,
With you my heart feels full,
Full of love and friends that care,
Full of things that deeply terr,
Terr in tiny bits of heart,
And gradually tearing my life apart.

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  • EvansV
    May 9

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    very eloqouent

    i love the wording you used very nice and flowed nicely you are very talented at your age keep up the great writing


  • StarOfDreams23
    January 3
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    This was very good. The rhythm was heart twisting and very smart choice in words! WAY TO GO MJ!!!!