Sight upon luscious curves
Such tender lines brace the impact
The way we stretch beneath covers,
Searching for a place
Where the comfort meets the songs of sadness
Reaching for disgrace
Had to recall a memory of another life
Wishing that I could make for a slightly better time
Your words prevail in the heat of this night
While our hearts can tell the advancement of linguistics
Beyond this meager mortal’s plight
Author notes
There is only one thing in which we can base the ideal and the premise of love, and that is experience. That's what this is about.
A contest entry
- Your Belief In Love (75 words or less) by oOJohnOo.
400 points, ended November 16, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This was really good. A very unique look on love.. you did a beautiful job. Best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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Deep rooted, and wordfully written. Your opinion of love is one I've never come across before. Great job
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