Touched you will be,
not just in any usual way,
but suckled from toe to toe
tongue traced about ankles and up the calves
nibbled about the thighs till brought to a writhe
kissed upon nether lips, delicately
tracing thy queendom before brushing my hair
up your tender sides, about the breasts supple and erect
breaths of heat around the neck, whispering longings into ear
and embraced like ALL TOMMOROWS WERE BORN THIS NIGHT!
Author notes
pic by incandescence on deviant
spacing a bit overly condenced to abide by the mandates for once (as the muse coughs for air LOL)
A contest entry
- Passing A Note To All Poets by Dalaney.
750 points, ended November 23, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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...mumbles and goes to check her draw...
nope nothing, story of my life
Juls
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Dear LORD! What a love note! I think I'd faint if I ever got one like this! lol Thank you so much for spicing up the contest
Love, Laney
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any time Lane
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I really liked your form in this, however incidental it might have been to you as you wrote. Especially the ending was great, together with the imagery. Very well written!
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sensual and seductive...someone is in for a wonderful night.
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Really love this one Adrian! Extremely sensual. I especially love the first 5 lines
Touched you will be,
not just in any usual way,
but suckled from toe to toe
tongue traced about ankles and up the calves
nibbled about the thighs till brought to a writhe.
Exquisite write! That is quite a pic!
Kelly
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thnx K, that is one helluva pic aint it
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Agree with the disturbed one, last line is killa... how can the muse cough when its busy lol great write my friend, love your take on the prompt and wish you well in the contest.
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ALL TOMMOROWS WERE BORN THIS NIGHT!
i like that line right there, you did a fantastic job on this whole poem, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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