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~!([_Beautiful_])!~

BEAUTIFUL girl, WHERE are you now?
Did YOU climb form YOUR shelf?
DID you fall to THE ground?
Everyone wanted TO be like you,
Now YOU'RE alone, upset and CONFUSED.
You were ONCE at the top,
WITH somewhere to GO.
Now you're BEATEN,
you're BRUISED.
You're FALLING below.

Your blond hair's a MESS,
Your makeup is SMUDGED.
It's a GOOD thing your mother
Never HELD a grudge.
SHE'S doing this, SHE did this,
She's HERE for you.
After ALL you did and PUT her through.

SHE told all your "FRIENDS",
they ALL came around.
But you COULDN"T see them,
COLD heart in the ground.
All hundred and FOUR were
To say GOODBYE, but somehow,
NONE of them wiped AN eye.
They KNEW it would happen,
To miss POPULAR.
That she'd KNOCK herself out
Or get RUN by a car.

YOU did this yourself,
MISS WONDERFUL,
Now we CAN all see what
IT is to be BEAUTIFUL...

I don't know what kind of effect i wanted by putting some words in capital. It just seemed better with them. More feeling i guess. It just came out of nowhere i think....

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  • SageyBaby
    November 17, 2008

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    the capitals arent effective; the words themselves are strong which is good. very good piece ; loved it


  • StickyNote5
    November 16, 2008

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    I dont know how i feel about this either. i mean, r beautifle in your own special way... everyone is. I just dont get it. and i dont like stickycaps. they make my eyeballs hurt. D: