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Freezing Calmly

your needles persist,
gaining more ground in the war
for my dead heartache,
that fails to awake from the
ninth circle of numbing pain

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brrrrrrrrrrrr! (coldly emo)

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  • Demmy-Defect
    November 15, 2008

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    interesting...
    it was yet another write that got me thinking about imagery and possibilities.
    it was very good.