These moments, breaking all the noise
In silence, darkness fills the void
Without your eyes
God to only feel hope
Standing on the edge of the fog storm
On the outside of warmth
Staring at all the infinite
Longing, for a caring touch
As the mist falls among the blades of grass
Another night
That lacks any light
Now my resolve strengthens again
On the outside of warmth
Will I find your eyes here?
Lasting, newer perceptions gone
But maybe, your arms will be in mine
I guess I will be inspired then as well
In another rainy night
Waiting for that care one day
On the outside of warmth
I hope that time comes soon
A contest entry
- 24ish Hour Contest by Polaja.
850 points, ended November 17, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Write me a poem about FOG! by poetrandy.
700 points, ended December 1, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Great Imagery!
Very good and thought provoking! Good luck in the contest!
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This poem has some nice imagery in it - and the sentiment behind it is great - this poem really leaves the reader with some thinking to do
Thank you for entering
Polly
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i like this very much, i can picture myself standing there watching different things happen, wonderful, best of luck in the contest
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