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Let's Be Blunt

I don't mind
I don't care
Run away while you can
the eye of the storm close to pass

Just say you're leaving
It's all the same
take me for all that I am
or don't take me at all

I might be macabre
insecure and rash
but I'm tenacious
I'll hold on to what I love
for all it's worth
I'll just close my eyes
I don't mind

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  • Demmy-Defect
    November 15, 2008

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    second stanza "your" should be "you're"...
    other than that, i thought it was wonderfully written
    i liked the ending, "I don't mind"
    -- it's a nice piece to think about...

    a very good write