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a precious thing

dew drops through your hands,
tiny moths dance across light,
a star burns as it
enters that fragile airspace,
which suffocates us blindly

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  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    November 14, 2008
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    Very beautifully penned and artistic. So full of imagery and passion. Thanks for your entry...