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Excerpt from Without the Grandeur of Crucifiction

The Confinement of Nihilism -

We are the Missing Link
  to a Broken Cycle
that never existed.
Amen….

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  • DolceVito gold member
    November 18, 2008
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    Short and powerful, Adrian...keep up the good work.


  • badnovocaine
    November 15, 2008

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    Ohhhh thats so good.
    I felt a certain vibe coming from this poem,
    and I liked how you used Amen at the end, kind of gave this write a certain impact.
    Nice job here.


  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    November 14, 2008
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    Very true...and very creative. Thank you for your entry...


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 14, 2008

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    that is the same image from The Wall, i like this poem, seriously good man, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest