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Forever

Deceased but forever etched into my memory
I call your name out in anguish
For the day you left, I broke the barriers
With my acid scented screams
And my hollow,glass tears

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  • Demmy-Defect
    November 15, 2008
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    i loved the imagery in this work!
    it was beautiful to read....

    very nice


  • stitched-heart
    November 14, 2008

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    i love the use of "acid scented screams" and "hollow, glass tears". very good imagery, good luck in the contest!