Somewhere in transition
there's a free and easy child,
with an untamed spirit,
running naked to the bone.
A contest entry
- 5 Lines or Less...ends in 1 hour!! Give me Your Best!! by Timeless Wisdom.
525 points, ended November 15, 2008, 18 entries
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Comments
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Very creative and full of imagery. I can see a child dying to break free from its inner self....
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I hope there are many of them, not necessarily "naked to the bone" Four lines of childish innocense that is so priceless. Well done sir poet and a worthy contestant.
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