See me....in the light of a newborn sunrise.
Hear me...the cries of a wounded child.
Taste me... virginal lips await their mate.
Smell me... an unpicked dew kissed rose.
Touch me... with hands that sculpt masterpieces.
Author notes
3rd line is dedictaed to sweetie pie Tony.. (poetssoul)
AP Name: Anessa
A contest entry
- 5 Lines or Less...ends in 1 hour!! Give me Your Best!! by Timeless Wisdom.
525 points, ended November 15, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your Best Three Pre-writes by piccola.
800 points, ended November 27, 2008, 140 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Quickie: Prewrites allowed. 10 lines or less by BrittlesSkittles.
800 points, ended November 30, 2008, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - (my ap family) prewrite contest by serenity silvermoon.
490 points, ended January 28, 115 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
thoughts?
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AP name in author's notes pretty please. =]
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wow. love the idea of the 5 senses! very original!!! sensual yet touching! i really like it!
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very clever in how you formatted the poem on the five senses....For originality you should of got more than HM
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Awesome is this piece
You have truly written a great piece here
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Wow. Becca
This is awesome. Congratulations on the HM. I totally loved this.
Much love
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Congrats...you are a contest finalist!
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Wonderful! I love the title choice and how it supports the writing ...very creative! And it is so full of passion and emotion. Bravo!
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This is an exellent piece of poetry.
Well thought out and penned
I like the third line, but Im a guy so go figure
Thanks for sharing and best of wishes to you.
Tony
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Ohhhh I love this one! Especially the last line! Excellent 5 lines!
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