Gone
like the piece of trash you threw away
Hopeless
like my love you put away
Missing
like yesterday's homework
Still
like the floor underneath us
FORGOTTEN
like a piece of dirt
A contest entry
- Short Poems ( 25 words or less) by misticmoonlite.
660 points, ended November 19, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very good, a great discription of what it is like being ignored and put down.
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This is one my daughter wrote hahaha she says thanks lol
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Nicely done... there is a sadness to your words that I think resonates within us all. Best of luck.
Ken
PS last line "piece"
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Thanks hahaha my baby girl wrote this one, I did correct it for her however just now...the piece part that is...thanks so much lol
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whoa! this is sad, but i see a form of truth in this piece, we see this way too often, thank you for this entry, good luck
Linda
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