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The Firmament





The firmament confidences gained in support,
when dusk awakens the mild spaces in silence,
with a true companionship revealing consciousness,
clutching the lives in wild childish soft breezes
of nature's laughter in zephyr with ultimate whispers.




















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  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    November 14, 2008

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    Wonderfully articulative! I love your choice of words and how they flow together so smoothly. Thank you for your entry.