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Ecstasy 2 (original)

My fingers touch your empty heart
Unspoken words of who thou art
Trembling pulses make me shiver
As down towards my soul they quiver

Don’t hurry now, relax and sigh
You know you need this just as I
Ecstasy will bring you pleasure
As our emotions rise together

I will fill those empty spaces
And take you to exotic places
Emotions will be soaring high
You and I will reach the sky

Tumbling softly to the ground
Then up again in feelings found
Ebbing from our secret places
While taking joy from our embraces

When all emotions have been sought
And both have all the pleasure caught
We lay us back and feel the peace
Oh! what wonder, what release

Now silently we lay and ponder
Feeling calm and feeling wonder
If only life could be this fine
And we could feel this all the time

Jenny Lloyd





Author notes

Stella187
Jenny Lloyd

Inspiration for this poem was from a contest. I think it was called "Sensuallity in Verse". Wanted to write something about love making as I had never written that type of poem before. I have written several variations of this poem. Hence the (original) tag.


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  • perfectsunset gold member
    March 24

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    Ooh sensually beautiful.
    Great stimualtion & gorgeous imagery.

    A lovely write!!

    Thanks for entering & best of luck


  • Luciferschild
    January 12

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    couldnt tell if this was about the drug or the feeling either way i think i like this better than the others you entered, thank you for entering and ill take a second look at this one


  • Bean Sidhe silver member
    December 23, 2008

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    Thank you for following my simple contest rules!

    This was a lovely work of sensual art. I am quite fond of erotica personally but find it difficult to relate because either they are way off the mark & get too down and dirty, going the way of porn or they are abstract & I'm not really sure if the writer intended them so or if I'm simply perverted! So, kudos to you!

    Thank you for your entry & good luck in the contest


  • Lagrimas
    December 7, 2008

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    Passion

    I enjoyed this very much. Sultry without being crude. Eye opening without being scaring. Very well done, thank you and good luck.


  • Mystery79
    November 16, 2008
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    that sh** was HOT

  • Priya1989
    November 16, 2008

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    Hi there

    This is an amazing poem. I too have never read such a deep and meaningful erotic poem where the rhyme only added to its spiciness rather than detract from it's beauty. Amazing, truly.

    I love the ending. I think great poems have great endings. That must mean your is great too I have a good feeling you will be exceptional in this contest.

    Well done, and kudos to you again.

    These lines really did strike me though:

    Trembling pulses make me shiver
    As down towards my soul they quiver

    We lay us back and feel the peace
    Oh! what wonder, what release

    And of course, like I said, the ending too Congratulations.


  • Odd Thomas
    November 15, 2008

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    very beautiful, very well written. I have never read such a great rhyming erotica like this before, thank you for entering this wonderful piece and good luck.

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