It's in the intensity of our love
how your gaze covers me in the palest blush
as my fingers trace the curve of your lips
how you take hold of my hand kissing each finger tip
As we honor each other a god and goddess
all warm and scented we gently caress
worshipping each other slowly we slip
between the soft satin sheets of divine bliss
In mutual pleasuring our energies flow
one in the same our spirits let go
as our bodies whisper in a voice of their own
the nectar from my flower silently flows
As my petals unfurl in the tenderness of amour
I give you my breath as I breathe in yours
as I move into you and our lips touch lips
our union so strong we become our kiss
As our moment comes, an orgasm of body and mind
our essence mingled I feel like a child inside
laying together bathing in the afterglow
within the sacred art of our loving we blossom and grow
Author notes
Love making is an art...Unknown.
A contest entry
- Love making ... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 26, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Seduce My Senses With Words Of Silken Beauty. by Poetryintheblood.
550 points, ended January 8, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ♥Sensual Fantasies (18+ :P)♥ by zee91190.
800 points, ended November 12, 62 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sizzling Hot by Fire-Fly.
500 points, ends November 25, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A truly seductive write. I love the picture too.
"In mutual pleasuring our energies flow
one in the same our spirits let go
as our bodies whisper in a voice of their own
the nectar from my flower silently flows" I love the imagery employed in this poem. Very well done.Bravo on a poem well written. Thank you for sharing this with me.
All the best
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Congrats on the HM!
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Thank you
~sugar~
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Thank you for your sensual and beautifully penned entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Thank you for the HM, valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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A very fine infact spledid poem from line one to the end
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Thank you very much for stopping by to read and comment
Glad you enjoyed.
~sugar~
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Loving your Creative Flow
Awe you have surely poured your desire into this poem, imagery or real your talent is truly beautiful.
An excellent take on the quote and GREAT write...novy
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It's been a while...thank you for your lovely comment
always a pleasure to have you read
~sugar~
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sensual images of love in motion. well penned my friend. Best to you in the contest.
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Always a pleasure to have you stop by. Thank you for reading and commenting
~sugar~
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yes..the child inside is the person of this universal want and the desires of this child are the truth of this whole creation..well done..
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STUNNING PIECE
Just popped on to comment on this Sugar. Wonderful, stunning writing. I can tell that this was written from the heart. You have poured your all into this and it shows. Every line is dripping with desire, want, and above all, LOVE. I think that this could possibly win gold. Well done to you.
Darkest Love Always
Wayne Leon
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Thank you baby for stopping by to read and your lovely comment
I appreciate and value your continued support.
Darkest love always
Chelle xxx
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WOW ! you are back and I am in awe with your poem hun
The love, the feelings the flow
the art you penned, the emotions are beautiful
Best wishes and good luck in the contest
Julie x
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Thank you hon for your lovley comment
Always a pleasure to have you read
~sugar~
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you so better come return the favor sugar sweets
i am in the same contest honey and let me tell you babe you are great competition for all of us i so loved this honey you did a very outstanding job good luck honey in the contest
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LOL!! When did you enter this? Thanks you hon for such a wonderful comment
a pleasure as always.
~sugar~
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A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE, INDEED - FROM A VERY BEAUTIFUL WOMAN!
It's been a long time since you wrote on of these, Baby BUT it is easy to see that this picture and the place you are in now has led to one of your best pieces. Sometimes, a writer has to wait until they are inspired again to give their muse a god swift kick in the bottom - or a SPLAT, SPLAT, SPLAT with a volley of snowballs! HE! HE! GOOD LUCK in the contest with this sweet, sensual, and beautiful piece that is as good as gold to me - and to another chap who I won't name here!
Peace & Love, my dear!
Earl.
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It has been a long time hon. I loved this pic as soon as I saw it...and you know who, has got a lot to answer to, also
Thank you so much for your lovely comment sweetie, always a pleasure to read. Valued & appreciated as always
Love you Chelle xxx
SPLAT! SPLAT! SPLAT! Gotcha on ya noggin
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Wow this is really sensual and romantic..I really loved this. ~
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Thank you for your lovley comment,
Valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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Wow this is beautiful. Your words are powerful as ever, and you conveyed such a wonderful and incredible piece of poetry. Absolutely breathtaking Keep it up.♥
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I'm glad you enjoyed this, thank you for reading and your lovely comment
truly appreciated and valued
~sugar~
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Beautiful.
Totally breathtaking, sis. One of your best ones. The flow to this is real pretty. Good job.
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Thank you bro, so glad you enjoyed
Appreciate you reading as always
your sis Chelle
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this is utterly heart stopping.Its words are so beautiful and sensual.It is so delicate, it seemsto have many layers, like tissue paper protecting an antiquewedding gown, and I held my breath, as I peeled back each layer, thanks for such an emotive read
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Thank you for your lovely review.
valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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Its been a while since I read something so intense and beautiful... Its an excellent write, one can picture it all in your words...LOVE IT....
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Thank you so much for such a lovely comment
truly appreciated
~sugar~
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