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Real Thing

I knew you werent the real thing
Just a simple lie
Another Dissapointment
And Now i wonder why?

A contest entry

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  • LionessK silver member
    November 15, 2008

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    welcome to allpoetry

    I think your third lines says so much... maybe the most important part. Few words can say so much, hold more emotion sometimes.
    Keep writing on and enjoy the site.


  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    November 15, 2008
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    Wonderful! you are a finalist!

  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    November 14, 2008

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    So true. Often when we have a loss in love, we wonder why it went wrong...why they had to be the wrong one. Beautifully written and thank you for your entry.

  • davidwright silver member
    November 14, 2008

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    Those are very insightful words. A suggestion; dissapointing is spelled "disappointing" furthermore if your intent is to enter the contest, which you should, run it through the new poem spot and not in the comments section. Happy trails.