i am that goddess
of time
and the transformation that is death.
i am the change
that reveals the caterpillar
into the butterfly.
i am the change that reveals
the liquid to gas.
i am the change that makes you lose yourself
to become yourself.
without me
there is no revelation.
without this sacrifice
there would never be
your second chance.
decay and rot
recycle and release
i am the fungus
that decomposes
your flesh
and turns it
back to the earth
break the mold
to dissintergrate into yourself
you may call this life
but remember that ghost
that lives within you.
Author notes
toechikira
based on the goddess Kali <3
A contest entry
- Loss, gain, and change (Philosophy) by SoulfulBubbles.
400 points, ended January 24, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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ok your one of role models lol
i love love your style you see life as it is a matrixs. to suck in the feelings that people cant see , i wonder do you distatch from the world without anyone seeing you , as that is gift espcaly if your a very social person.
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Excellent write
We are the keepers of out soul and we must care for it with love and never leave it locked within great write here I give this write a 10
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yay! 10! thanks
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Ahhh i like this =D
It is nice write and all .
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thank u thank u
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beautiful dont change !
..... wow.. got me lost in it.. and pshhh u don need to change anything girl !! ahahahi cant pic a line ahahaha too good !
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^_^ thanks!
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I liked the form and the concept
Their are some lines I question. Time and death are masculine gods: Chronos. Saturn, Father Time, Grim Reaper. "I am the change that turns the liquid into gas" seems weak as an example of death, change and transformation. The last three lines are not a strong enough ending for the train of thought. I enjoyed your write and would like you to take it to a highter level.
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yup yup they are masculine except there is a goddess named Kali who is the goddess of time and death. am i allowed to edit this? (to fix the last lines)
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