Your Carmel eye pierce into my skin harshly, yet so softly
cold finger tips touch my arm, trying to melt my pain away
Gold like nature sweeps me off my feet
Such a melodic voice soothing my worries into nothing
Edward- Beast to my world, fallen lion to the lamb
I will love you forever
Still you cold lips linger on mine, stone like body holding me
Your jacket still hangs on my shoulders, my safety net
Inhaling your scent is so intoxicating, so overwhelming
for I can't obtain you vampiristic Dazzles
How is it, that I'm not use to your beautiful voice
your freezing touch, thirsting eyes or god like appearance?
Still you Dazzle me
Author notes
another edward and bella poem, hope you like
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Awesome Twilight write!
Who can resist Edward's golden eyes,
hair like bronze,
angelic voice,
mesmerizing piano melodies,
marble figure,
or vampire charm?
I can't lol!
Nice job!
Safely hidden in the darkness,
~ The Rocker Who Lost All -
i like it
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It's good that you capture a bit of Bella's mind in here. I picture this in the book, the meadow. It's nice and sweet, but it's missing more detail. Overall, it's good. Nice job Good luck
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This reminds me so much of the wedding, or at least the honeymoon that they share in the final book. It's the knowing and the understanding, yet not knowing at all. That seems to make no sense, but should to those who've read the books. I also love how you capture the coldness of his touch, yet not a coldness of unease, moreover just... shiver.
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verry cptivating it captures bellas and edwards love 4 eachother perfecly
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beautifully written! I really enjoyed this.
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OH MY GOD!
This was truly amazing..and the picture just took not the cake..but the whole darn bakery...wonderful!!!!!!!!!
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