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"Love"

In a world where no words are to be found,
our conversation seems to turn to "love."
Waiting until the day, these words reach you.

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  • alex-al
    January 21
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    niceo

    i like it i seem to like the short poems


  • joeyy
    November 18, 2008
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    but great job =)


  • joeyy
    November 18, 2008
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    those words are never going to reach me


  • KayJay
    November 15, 2008

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    Very nicely done... you've certainly captured the waiting and anxiety that young love seems to bring on. Well penned and best of luck.
    Ken


  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    November 15, 2008
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    My heart sank with this poem...because I relate to it so well....wonderfully penned...


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    hopefully it has reached that special person, lovely piece here, thank you for joining in my contest
    and good luck
    Linda

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